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    • Status: Closed
    • Priority: Minor Minor
    • Resolution: Fixed
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      Line 19: In line with "The EC represents ..." on line 64, consider starting line 19 with "The Executive Committee (EC) represents a cross-section of both major stakeholders and other members of the Java community, and is responsible for ..."

      Lines 30, 38 (like line 41): Drop "responsible" in "... the responsible EC."

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        pcurran added a comment -

        I think "An Executive Committee" is appropriate in line 19. This doesn't imply that there is/may be more than one EC, simply that this is the first time we've introduced the term.

        As for line 30 - yes, I've deleted "responsible."

        Thanks for taking the trouble to read and comment!

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        pcurran added a comment - I think "An Executive Committee" is appropriate in line 19. This doesn't imply that there is/may be more than one EC, simply that this is the first time we've introduced the term. As for line 30 - yes, I've deleted "responsible." Thanks for taking the trouble to read and comment!
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            Alex Buckley
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